The Enchantment of Airplane Residence
A house is a place where people live, take a rest and come together with their family. It is not just a place for living because sometimes people pay attention to their house shape and decoration. They want their houses become different from others so, they build their house in unique shape. For example, an airplane residence. Let us observe this house from outside and inside.
From outside, we can describe that the shape of the house is very unique. The shape is like airplane and there is house in the middle of the airplane, which color is orange. There are many trees around the house. Since the location is on the hill, there are stairs to go there. The view from back side is very beautiful, look at the beautiful blue beach. There are many shady and green trees, mainly are palm trees. After we know the house from outside let us see from inside.
From inside, there are some rooms which are decorated and made from wood, such as; a balcony, bed room, family room, and living room. In the balcony, there are three brown and wood chairs. In the middle of it there is a round table, a beautiful lamp is hung on the ceiling. From right sight, there are three brown chairs, there is a door to go another room. In the bed room, there are two beds which are covered by white bed sheet. In the corner, there is a cupboard, in the middle of the two beds, there is flower vase on the table. There are two fans on the ceiling. Every left and right wall, there are many small windows, so that this room will get much fresh air. In family room, there is one television, two chairs. In the left of wall, there are one big window and two small windows. There is also a fan on the ceiling and there are stairs to go to other room. In the other bed room, there is a bed, two flower vases on the two tables, a fan, a hung lamp and a cupboard. In the living room, there are three chairs, one flower vase on the round table in the middle of the chairs. There are some photo frames on the wall, a air conditioner, a fan, and two tables in the right side.
In conclusion, a unique house is looked from the shape of the house, the decoration. Beside that the scenery around the house and the location are also important to make the house more beautiful.
u have little incorrect punctuation on it.
BalasHapusand " one fan, one hung lamp " should be changed
in correct form... ex: a lamp etc.
u have a good essay nahdia
just revising it to be more better essay^_^
yes, it's good. keep on revising and editing ya ^_^
BalasHapusok miss....thanks for your attention^_^
BalasHapus